Manhart's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Loki Never Lies]

I really like this

Awesome guitar riffs. How many guitars are supposed to play in the first part, and same question for the part 2 with the melody?
I could play some mean drums to this piece ^^
I am looking forward to listen to the final one !

thatguy669606 responds:

The intro has two guitars playing, the verse could then be played with one guitar, but I 'm going to throw a second guitar playing harmonies. Essentially this song is built for 2 guitars. If you would like to throw some drums over it be my guest. Ill send you the .flp once I'm finished if you would like and you can put drums to it because I can't say I'm the best at drums.

[Sunny Day_]

Simple and nice

Nice and easy to listen to pop song.
Lyrics and a singer would do the last 2 stars! :)

CrustICroC responds:

I can´t sing :)

but... thx :D

[Bass it up]

Original

I find this very original.
Awesome bass.
Only complaint is a tiny click sound on each bassdrum and snare hit. I don't think it is supposed to be there.

FanceyPants responds:

thnx for the review. Actually this is the wrong song. Hmm i need to stop naming songs the same.

[Sitar Star]

Nice sound !

I really like the sitar sound. It might be a bit syntethic. But it is way better than any sitar sounds I have found. Maybe add a bit reverb to it. I think it might give it a less syntethic. Lovely bongo's btw ! ;D

rockyace42 responds:

Thanks!!!

[O Loki]

Mean shit

Nice riff's. well played. I really like the guitars being a bit untight.
But I agree with Deathcalypse. Cymbals are too loud. More snare !

Across responds:

Heh thanks I'll tone it down next time with the symbals and give it more snare power XD glad you liked the song.

[Dance of the Flutes]

Very enjoyable

I don't like the open hi-hat sound. The beat is a bit boring too. Maybe some reverb on the clap sound would do something to it.
But I really enjoyed the song !
The bassline is killer !! And the melodies rock.

Xanmar responds:

Haha, thanks for the review. Yeah, the open hi-hat sound is one that came with Fruity Loops, and I was too lazy to look for another. But I have numerous ones now.

[Tall, #307]

That's smooth

I really like this song.
Smooth song, with a nice subby feel.
Not like everything else in here :)
I like the pure sounds you use for melody. A nice contrast to the subby beat.
But please make an ending tone or something ? I think it stops too sudden.

Dvorask responds:

thx :) i'll put in an end.

[Abscene]

Not good

This just sounded like short random pieces put together with too much delay on it.
No rhythm, no tones that actually matched eachother in an either a good or an scary way. Too random dude !

Ar1x responds:

Thank you for your review.
Actually, you are correct, this has no rhythm, it's very random.
It was actually just random guitar licks, with no intention of ever recreating.
I will rewrite this with tones (that try) to match, and a beat (hard to do w/o a drummer) ;p.

Thanks again!

Ar1x

[~|| Life ends]

Beautiful

What a beautiful track dude...
I really liked it. This works even without lyrics. But I would like to hear it with a rapper busting on it !
Keep it up!

T-Free responds:

Thanks for your review!
Maybe there will someone rap on it soon. Now I don't really know.

[Gold Rollin' [Instrumental]]

Beautiful

this is a real beauty.
Loved the beat and the piano.
and it really looped well!! Very great!

Treadz responds:

cheers dude. shame someone voted in down tho :(